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After leaving the orphanage, seventeen-year-old Lida inherited something strange — a small house in the wilderness, passed down from her long-deceased grandmother. The half-collapsed building stood alone on the edge of the forest, as if forgotten by time.
No one was waiting for her. Nothing tied her to the past. She took this as a chance to start fresh. Modest, but hers.
On the third day, to clear her mind after endless cleaning, Lida ventured into the forest to pick mushrooms. She wandered deeper and deeper until she stumbled upon an unusual clearing carpeted with soft moss. In the middle, like a relic from another era, stood an old airplane — almost intact but entangled in roots and covered with rust, as if it had grown into the forest itself.
Curiosity overrode caution. Lida climbed into the cockpit and screamed: in the pilot’s seat sat a motionless skeleton, frozen in its last moment of life, wearing a uniform. Around its neck hung a medallion… engraved with her name.
From that moment, everything changed.
What began as an attempt to start a new life alone plunged her into a mystery rooted in the times of war — missing crews, secret missions, family secrets… and something far greater than she could comprehend.
Lida froze, gripping the edge of the cockpit. The air was thick, smelling of rust, mold, and forgotten years.
The skeleton seemed to be waiting for her.
She barely tore her gaze away and reached for the medallion. Her fingers trembled. Carefully, reverently, she removed it from the chain.
On the back were engraved the words:
“To Lida. When you grow up — find me.”
Her throat went dry. Her heart pounded as if trying to break free.
“What nonsense?” she whispered, her fingertips growing cold.
The pilot’s uniform was astonishingly well-preserved, as if time had spared only him. On the instrument panel, crumpled notes in English lay scattered, one reading:
“Mission 13. Northern Sector. Classified.”
She didn’t know English, but the number was clear.
An unlucky number.
When Lida emerged from the forest, the sun was already setting. The trees seemed to close in, the air heavier, the rustling louder. She hurried home, clutching the medallion tightly — forgetting the mushrooms.
The next morning, she felt drawn to the forest again. Not by fear, but by a deep unease, as if something demanded her attention.
Before leaving, a strange creak came from the attic. The house was too quiet for anyone to be there. Upstairs, she found an old suitcase filled with letters. One was addressed to her:
For my granddaughter Lida. If you return.
Opening the envelope, she read:
If you are reading this — it means you found the plane. Keep silent about it. It is not from our time. And perhaps, it came for you.
Goosebumps rose on her skin. Everything was beyond ordinary.
But one question haunted her most: if the pilot knew her name — who was he?
The next day, Lida woke feeling as though someone had called her in a dream. Thoughts raced:
How could he know me? Why me? Who is that man in the cockpit? And how did grandmother know?
Stubbornness won over fear. Dressed warmly, flashlight in hand, she headed into the forest.
Each step was heavy. The bushes seemed to close behind her. The trees whispered overhead.
When she reached the clearing — the plane was gone.
Only young grass, soft moss, and silence remained. No rusty wreckage, no metal gleam. As if it had all been a dream.
She searched feverishly, finding nothing. Somewhere far off, a woodpecker tapped.
Then — a branch snapped.
She turned sharply. Behind the trees flickered a shadow — tall, indistinct.
Her heart froze. The shadow froze. Neither moved.
After a moment, it vanished.
But she knew — someone had been watching. Maybe all along.
That night, Lida couldn’t sleep. The room smelled damp. Old boards creaked. Outside the window, something alive seemed to be peeking in.
She reread grandmother’s letter:
The plane will return if you remember. You are not just an orphan, Lida. Your blood remembers more than you think.
The words chilled her.
Sitting on the floor, clutching the medallion, she suddenly felt the air tremble. The room shook slightly, as if reality was wavering.
From the wall, like through water, the outline of the cockpit appeared. There, in dim light, sat the pilot. His eyes were alive. And he looked right at her.
“Lida…” came a muffled voice, distant as from underwater.
The medallion heated like hot metal in her hand.
“Who are you? Why are you calling me?!” she shouted.
The pilot did not move. Only his lips whispered:
“Remember the coordinates.”
Then everything vanished. The room returned to normal.
On the floor lay a note — slipped out from the past. On it:
Latitude 62.001. Longitude 47.744. 12:13 — don’t be late.
Lida trembled. Determination grew inside her.
The next morning, the wind picked up. The forest rustled anxiously. Something was waiting.
At exactly 12:12, Lida stepped into the clearing. Her watch ticked in sync.
12:13.
The medallion flared. The air twisted into a vortex. Before her, the plane appeared again — not a mirage, but real, tangible.
Now the cockpit door was open.
Lida approached slowly. The pilot’s seat was empty. On the instrument panel lay a new sheet of paper.
She took it.
A child’s drawing: a girl holding the hand of a man in uniform. The caption read:
“Dad and me. Lida, 4 years old.”
Her heart stopped. The world tilted.
“Dad?” she breathed.
A branch cracked behind her.
Turning sharply, she saw something moving at the edge of the clearing — a pale, mouthless face, eyes human but alien.
The creature did not move, but Lida knew:
If she ran — it would follow.
Slowly, she stepped back toward the plane. The door was ajar.
Inside, on the pilot’s seat lay a second medallion, identical to hers.
She took it.
A voice echoed:
“They are coming. You must make it, Lida. Only you can close the cycle.”
“What cycle? What is happening?!” she shouted in her mind.
The creature moved — silently, unhurried.
Lida stepped inside and slammed the door.
The cockpit lit up. Dim lights flickered on, the panel glowing faintly without wires or power.
Outside — silence. Beyond the visible world awaited something nameless.
She reached for the START button, held her breath, and pressed.
Space jerked. Gray light filled the cockpit, tearing time apart.
Outside, the forest vanished.
Before her lay an abandoned airbase — frozen in the past. Planes, flags, people in uniform. Among them — him.
The pilot. Her father. Alive.
He looked straight at her.
“You made it. Now choose: stay here… or go back.”
Lida didn’t know what to say.
Behind her — loneliness, orphanage, the empty house.
Here — her father. A man who shouldn’t exist but had been waiting.
“Decide,” he said, “and know: much depends on this choice.”
She gazed through the glass. Beyond time, the scene repeated in a loop: the clearing, the plane, the same her. The cycle. A closed circle.
“Why me? Why you?” she finally asked.
He looked at her with pain.
“Because you are not just a daughter. You are the result of a choice.
I went on this flight knowing I wouldn’t return. It was a mission — to cross the time rift, to pass coordinates to the next generation. But something went wrong. I got stuck between times, like trapped in resin.
Grandmother knew. She was warned. But you are the first to find me. The rift opens once every 50 years. And you — are 17. Exactly when it all begins anew.”
A dull thud ran along the plane’s body.
“He has come,” whispered the father.
“Who is he?” asked Lida.
“The Keeper of the cycle. He cannot speak. But he is not an enemy. He is a guardian, searching for those who break boundaries.”
The creature began to emerge from the plane’s wall — not a monster, but a reflection of something old, familiar.
“He… was me?” she whispered.
The father was silent.
The creature reached for the medallion on her chest.
She understood.
If she stayed, she would be with her father — outside time.
If she left, she could warn the world, break the cycle.
But then he would disappear forever.
And she would be alone again.
The medallion warmed, a familiar voice whispered:
“You are stronger than you think. You are the link. Choose with your heart — and time will hear you.”
Lida clenched her fist, standing between father and creature.
“I cannot lose you both.
But if I stay, everything will begin again. No one will be saved.
“Forgive me…”
She extended the medallion to the creature.
The plane trembled. A flash. Time shattered.
“Lida!” her father shouted. “Thank you. For everything.”
Then — silence.
Epilogue
She woke on the floor of the house. Sunlight played through dust motes.
Everything was as before. Almost.
Near her lay a charred sheet of paper.
On it:
The cycle is complete.
Pass it on.
Your blood remembers.
Lida stood and looked out the window. The forest stretched beyond.
But now she knew the truth.
There was no longer a shadow in it.
